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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:05 am

Furen had escaped through, a pot hole, where he then rapidly ran through the sewers. He discovered a secret path where he then stumbled on his back. His body had not yet recovered from his battle with Reox. "Whats wrong with me.....who am I!!!" He screamed feeling more confused then ever, and to make it worse he felt as tho he had hurt so many people. Everyone he killed was now swimming in his memory. It haunted him, he absorbed the psychi's he new everything about everyone he had killed on that day. He pressed his hand on a wall only to accidently destabilize the chemicals where he discovered a underground tunnel.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:17 am

Rebecca finally stopped near an open pot hole. She looked around while she caught her breath. "Where are you Furen....". She looked oddly at the pot hole for a second but then jumped into it. As she got into the sewer she coughed abit. "So disgusting...he better be this way...". Rebecca made her way through the sewer in a daze. "Furen?...." She almost tripped but caught herself and sighed deeply.
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:25 am

Furen traveled through the path way, He began to walk as several statues stood tall. He got images in his head, as a loud buzzing rang in his mind. It was as if someone was taking a rake to a chalk board, he walked forward, as he touched a door and the buzzing stopped. He looked up to see he was touching a giant door. It had symbols on it that oddly enough he could understand...."What.... is.... this...." He then got more images as they were so painful he fell to the ground in pain.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:31 am

Rebecca continues to walk through the sewer and gets to the wall, she looked around thinking someone was watching her but then walked through it. She walked down the path way looking around in a nervous manner with her arms crossed against her chest. "Furen?....where are you?"
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:41 am

He sat in the fedal position the thoughts constantly probing of his mind. He began to hover as several lights were beaming into his body. He was given insite to things that had happened. He then screamed the surge being to much for his body as it broke down into mercury. The path way the sealed up behind Rebecca. The statues came to life and with there giant rock swords began to swing at her. Furen could be seen in the distance as he was being shocked and his mass was dripping mercury everywhere.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:46 am

Rebecca blinked and ducked from the swords she began to run faster to where Furen was as she looked back seeing the path closed. "What is going on!....". She grit her teeth as stopped and made beams appears in her hands, she shoot at the satues seperately. "Why are they after me.."
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:14 am

The Statues then kept coming, they swung there swords, and maces. The spoke in a foreign tongue that was not of this world. Furen continued to scream. The pain being to much, he then shot a beam from his body up into the roof and out into the sky. It changed colors several times before Furen fell to the ground. The Statues then retreated, and left her alone.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:19 am

Rebecca held her arms infront of her still as she looked around at the statues still uneasy. She sighed deeply and her beams disappeared. She looked at them a last time and ran towards Furen. "This can't be at all good....he could actually be more dangerous than i thought." She finally caught up to him but stopped where she was. "Furen....whats going on....whats happening to you?".
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:30 am

He was knocked out cold. the door then opened where the a meteor fragment rested on a podium. It sent Rebecca a Telepathic message. "Bring the chosen closer...." Furen was still out, he appeared dead.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:35 am

Rebecca looked at the meteor fragment then down at Furen. "I dont understand any of this...". She bit her bottom lip and walked over to Furen slowly. She grabbed one of his arms and helped him up so that he leaned on her. She somewhat dragged him up to the podium and set him infront of it. "Whats going on?...."
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:56 am

"The boy is chosen....he is destined for greatness indeed..." Another voice could be heard, this one sounding more female. "Yes indeed he passed the trials and furthermore passed them without his memory" "I still say he needs more a long with the rest of his kind they are not yet ready" The Rock then shot a blast of energy at Furen thus reviving Furen to gull health. "I am back.....He touched himself and smiled and I remember everything....My-my daughter...where is she" He freaked out and scratched his head looking at the female. "Rebecca where am I...." He remembered her from previous but for the most part he was confused.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 1:59 am

Rebecca smiled and put her arms infront of her really happy he was alive but her smile faded. "I followed you...down a pot hole and through the sewers....". She walked up to him and stared at him."Furen....who are you?"
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:40 am

Furen sighed "I am me what do you mean who am I" He smiled and looked at the meteor which was now silent. "Whats that....." He seemed a bit more cheery then usual. "Ahh Rebecca I understand so much now....I have information to give to reox about finding a cure as well...." He smirked and scathed his head again. He then stood up, and the earth began to shake. The Meteor then vanished in a instant as if it was never there.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 2:49 am

Rebecca stared at him then shook her head. "Okay wait wait....first you looked like you were dead...then this weird meteor comes out of nowhere and then you're fine again...then im told that you are the chosen one...and now it disappeared and you're all of a sudden happy." Rebecca put a hand to her face and sighed deeply she then looked at him once more. "I'm a mutant but even this is really weird...Now tell me whats going on and what you're talking about."
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 3:08 am

He let out a deep breath and then began to talk. "I will start from the beginning, my name is Furen Jara O'veir, I am a doctor.......in the middle of working something exploded and I flew out of a building hit my head and lost my memory. During this explosion I gained mutant powers....after that I met you then everything gets hazy then I wake up in a dark dark place some portal opens up I walk through it and fall in a pot hole where I continued to walk forward and I found this place this place went zap and zapped me, tho I did not realize it, but they were beaming knowledge into my mind and I remembered who I was....I had a wide...and kids............." He then looked down, "There all gone...."
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 3:12 am

Rebecca looked down and put her hands in her laps. "Oh......". She looked away then back at him slightly. "What will you do now....Furen?". She seemed abit uneasy by what he said but ignored it.
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:43 pm

He sighed..."I guess I will help you and reox if he will have me, I will also look for my family..." He then looked around, "We should probably get out of here..." He stood up and walked forward only for a door to open. "Come on maybe its a way out..."
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Post by Rebecca Kane Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:46 pm

Rebecca followed him while looking back where the meteor once was. "Or it could be a trap...." She felt really bad for Furen and wished she could help. Maybe Reox can help him... she thought.
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Post by Pandar Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:51 pm

Furen walked through the door, to find the entire room was made of glass, and they were actually underwater "This is a pretty site..." He began to walk down the long hall way, made of a glass like substance as several fish swam by to see him. He then pressed his face against the glass, the mind warp had a somewhat childish affect on what could be called his brain. He shook his head and retook a serious stance attempting to impress Rebecca with how mature he could pretend to be. At the end of the hall way, all that could be seen was a bright light that was shining down on the stairs that led upwards.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Tue Aug 11, 2009 12:28 am

Rebecca looked around in amazement as she stroked her hair. "It really is pretty...". She looked over at him and chuckled at how he reacted to it all. She followed to the end of the hallway but couldnt help to look back at the glass at all the fish and its beauty. "Do we really have to leave just yet?.....i've never seen a place like this...". Rebecca was amazed by anything that was pretty or held its own beauty, almost like an obsession.
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Post by Pandar Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:01 am

Furen looked at her, "Sure we can stick around...." He then sat down and stared at the ceiling, and the fish that swam by..."If I didnt, know better I bet we could get out of there easy...I mean the locks Elena put up they would go away easy" He then rolled over and layed on his stomach. "Rebbecca why is it you think there is war..."
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Post by Rebecca Kane Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:42 am

Rebecca walked over to the glass and put her hands on it. She watched as the fish swam by and sighed deeply. "Because of differences....but humans are all alike no matter if they are mutants". She looked down and leaned her forehead against the glass, her hair falling forward in the process. "As long as humans live....there will be war..." Her voice trailed off once she said war.
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Post by Pandar Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:13 pm

Furen then gave her a omniscient look, he stood up and walked to stand behind her. "and will you be a part of it..." He poked and prodded her spine, letting of a somewhat gentle color. He was being serious yet playful at the same time. "If you had a choice.....would you join war if it meant you gained something out of it....even if what you ask is noble.." He pressed his finger to his chin as he began to think about it himself.
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Post by Rebecca Kane Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:30 am

Rebecca looked to the side of her almost trying to look at him. She looked down and closed her eyes. "Only if i gained something from it...." She grit her teeth as opened her eyes to look at the water. "Only....". She tilted her head and turned around, leaning her back on the glass and staring at him. "What about you?"
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Post by Pandar Wed Aug 12, 2009 9:53 pm

He sighed "I am unsure...as of right now een if I were to get what I wanted this means that everyone in the war would suffer...." At the current moment his mind was analyzing the data he had been given, the thoughts of war all came as to top of all of the smaller thoughts. War was coming...."If I told you a war was coming in the next few months, and it would lead to the apocalypse of this planet...would you try and stop it?"
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